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In days that I remember
Contributed by
wordsy
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Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 08:31:25 AM in AEST
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In days that I remember,
there are thoughts I can’t forget.
That rise up in the worries,
that on my shoulders sit.
And there they long remain,
in the memory of my years.
Along with all the stains,
that were left there by my tears.
And along with all the sorrows,
a new one for each day
A price it cost,
something lost.
It’s just the dues you pay.
To the sadness that surrounds you,
like a fog in which you live.
That seems to take, for sorrow’s sake
more than you can give.
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wordsy
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2003-10-27 08:31:25]
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Re: In days that I remember
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by brokenheartedfool on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 08:36:56 AM AEST
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Good write. I liked it.
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Re: In days that I remember
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by Saira on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 02:26:13 PM AEST
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Great. Good work!
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Re: In days that I remember
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 04:08:16 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem keep it up. |
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Re: In days that I remember
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 12:13:59 AM AEST
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I feel ya totally. Keep that chin up and the smile on yer face.
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