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I remember you
Contributed by
ravi
on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 03:21:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I go to work everyday,
without getting your lovely morning kiss.
I remember you.
I drive along the lonely highway,
without you giggling by my side.
I remember you.
I roam about the city mall aimlessly,
passing through our favorite eating joints.
I remember you.
I fight in the boxing ring every Saturday night,
searching for your excited face in the stands,
I remember you.
I try my hand in cooking every now and then,
waiting for you to appreciate my burnt toast.
I remember you.
I come back in the evening, tired and defeated,
trying to gather broken fragments of my life.
I remember you.
I lie wrecked on my death bed,
waiting for death to unite our souls.
I remember you.
Copyright ©
ravi
... [
2003-10-27 03:21:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I remember you
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 03:51:08 AM AEST (User
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sad.. but..beautifully written. venkat |
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Re: I remember you
(User Rating: 1 ) by addie on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 06:56:21 AM AEST (User
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that was reallly nice .. really liked it .
addie |
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Re: I remember you
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 07:20:31 AM AEST (User
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So beautifull even in tis sadness.
I know the feelings really good.
peace,
emy |
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Re: I remember you
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 04:53:32 AM AEST (User
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breathtaking poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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