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How Much Longer?!
Contributed by
Chanti
on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 11:15:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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waking up, in a cold bed,
too early to stop dreaming,
shivering as i climb out,
looking into the mirror,
so many imperfections,
bones aching,
whats the point?
I drag myself to school,
stuck in a subway,
of thousands of people,
coughing and sneezing,
and ive never felt such hate,
for so many people,
people who i dont even know,
why do i bother?
Listen attentively,
to every word that they say,
and yet i still fail,
its never good enough,
trying my hardest,
but they push me harder,
and harder,
until i cant take it,
i just want to scream,
i want to lash out,
and murder them all.
Those insensitive jerks,
they dont understand,
they dont even care,
they can all rot in hell.
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2003-10-26 23:15:30]
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Re: How Much Longer?!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 11:44:19 PM AEST
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Hahaha...Chanti, just so you know....we teachers feel the same way...lmao... loved this..thanks for letting us know how you feel...
(Now get your butt off to school....cuz I have to also...)
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Re: How Much Longer?!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 12:31:25 AM AEST
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Lol!
Ok, this is great, i feel your pain i really do, another one that hits home
keep up the great work and take care
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Re: How Much Longer?!
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 02:48:48 PM AEST
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Heh good stuff I can relate to the 1st stanza perfectly good write.
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