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the light
Contributed by
brokenheartedfool
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Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 08:14:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sitting in the bright sun
still to never have any fun
the cuts too deep
but i dont want people to weep
dont shed one tear for me
because the light is what i want you to see
Copyright ©
brokenheartedfool
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2003-10-26 20:14:05]
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Re: the light
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by Stalkee on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 10:03:10 PM AEST
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| woah! that was really good, I enjoyed it |
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Re: the light
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 11:13:13 PM AEST
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Sad, but lovely...
Jenni |
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Re: the light
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by Jacquelynne on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 10:05:14 AM AEST
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| Awww. dont hide behind something, let your emotions out. obviously, it makes for great poetry. I find that I am most inspired when i feel horrid, and want to die. keep writing... |
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