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Lost Love
Contributed by
brokenheartedfool
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Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 08:09:59 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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She says she doesn't love me any more.
My heart just feels sore.
I felt my heart rip.
Like it got stabbed with a knife tip.
I will never be the same.
I dont seek fame
I just want a woman's love
so that I can soar above
the sky is never bright
I need a little light.
Happiness is what I would like to see
but that I will probably never be.
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2003-10-26 20:09:59]
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Re: Lost Love
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by arden on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 08:14:36 PM AEST
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| whoa. thats really good. i loved it. |
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Re: Lost Love
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by robbieb on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 08:48:30 PM AEST
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| Keep remembering, everything happens for a reason. Your happiness will come. I liked your emotion in this. It was very open. Thank You. |
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Re: Lost Love
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by Stalkee on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 10:01:47 PM AEST
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| good job on this, I'm in your boat right now...thinking I won't really truly be happy. but we need not to worry...we'll both find what we're looking for eventually...we just need to give it time. again, great job! |
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Re: Lost Love
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by Jacquelynne on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 10:02:53 AM AEST
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| i liked this one. good write. |
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