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bad dreams
Contributed by
brokenheartedfool
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Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 08:06:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Im afraid to close my eyes
You have already broken all our ties
I dont want to go to sleep
I dont want to wake up and weep
When I dream I am weak
And its you that they seek
I miss you so much
All I want is to feel your touch
All I want is one last kiss
Before I go swim with the fish
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brokenheartedfool
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2003-10-26 20:06:09]
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Re: bad dreams
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by Stalkee on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 10:05:06 PM AEST
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| this is a lot like me right now...I hate to go to sleep now...I always have dreams about a certain someone, and it hurts when I wake up in the morning....great write |
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Re: bad dreams
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by GML on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 12:09:38 AM AEST
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| Title say's enough ... the piece say's it all. |
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Re: bad dreams
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by Jacquelynne on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 10:00:41 AM AEST
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| KEWL. |
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Re: bad dreams
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:43:03 PM AEST
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This poem was great except for 2 glaring mistakes. The last line sounds really awkward. For starters it has nothing to do with the poem and doesn't rhyme with kiss. Also this poem could be a lot better if it was a bit longer. Just my thinking. Once again a good poem though
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Re: bad dreams
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by DirtyFool on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 08:54:56 PM AEST
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This poem is sweet and deep! i love it
Keep up the written. I love reading it
dirtyfool |
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