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IT WAS YOU
Contributed by
robbieb
on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 07:33:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Across the phone
your smile touched me
Brightening my day
lifting my mood
so quick and right
It lit up my soul!
Across the room
your stride reached me
Hugging my body
caressing my shoulders
so warm and light
It lit up my life!
Across the mouth
your lips brushed me
Soft and long
making me want you
bringing me to ecstacy
It lit up my heart!
It was you!!
~ Robbie ~
Copyright ©2003 Robbie B
Copyright ©
robbieb
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2003-10-26 19:33:31]
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Re: IT WAS YOU
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by Schnikes13 on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 07:37:19 PM AEST
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So sweet and sincere!
Great write! |
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Re: IT WAS YOU
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 08:07:58 PM AEST
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| words from the heart, one of my favorite reads, excellent, Crow |
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