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Secret Mens Business
Contributed by
twinkletoes
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Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:45:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I listen to her words
of enchantment that I hear
words that linger in my mind
words I sometimes fear.
Pictures painted in many colours
with carefully planned out strokes
that are touched here and there
upon the page of this Aussie bloke.
I try to be the right stuff
I work hard at it all the while,
but always seem to stuff it up
and my thoughts end up in a pile.
a pile of twisted dreams and tales
of love and other things
stuff that I know nothing of
but when I expeience them, they make me sing.
Struth! What am I saying?
My mates won't understand
When I talk of love and little birds
this is not the making of a man!
Better end it here
they will think that I am queer
but I hope my girl just hears these words
I love you~
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Re: Secret Mens Business
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by Philipa on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:59:30 PM AEST
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twinkletoes, I hope you TELL her you love her. Remember you may think we can read your mind...but we can't. *wink*
Philipa |
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Re: Secret Mens Business
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 07:25:57 PM AEST
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Love is something you do..not say.
If you love this woman prove it to her and who gives a damn what your mates, or anyone else thinks about it. Can't have your cake and eat it too my friend. Well done! Larry |
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Re: Secret Mens Business
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 09:07:44 PM AEST
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Forget all this crap love is too hard to come by go for the girl.
shari |
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Re: Secret Mens Business
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 01:39:04 AM AEST
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| empty words doesn't make a man..better be practical..prove your love to her.. |
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Re: Secret Mens Business
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 02:56:31 AM AEST
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ahhh, love your poem...
keep letting your heart roam
and your pen over pages
for love, friend, is ageless
hugs n' love, nessa |
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