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The Girl
Contributed by
crow
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Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 04:24:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Three scholars stood at the edge of the road,
a very young girl, made her way past,
carrying a much to heavy load.
Her body bent and twisted, her hands raw and bloody from carrying this stone"
Three scholars simply asked, child why don`t you throw the stone away.
Bent and bloody she simply answered;
Its all I have...........Crow
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Re: The Girl
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 04:30:29 PM AEST
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very good piece...sometimes we fear letting go of what we have...but with faith we know better lays down the road
Shari |
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Re: The Girl
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by Saira on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 05:05:48 PM AEST
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"Its all I have"....this line has deeply touched my heart...great and thought provoking write as usual!
Saira |
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Re: The Girl
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by POOBEAR on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:04:09 PM AEST
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Hi Crow,
I have to agree that the line "Its all I have"
says so much.There are things I hold onto
whether they are good for me or not.
Great write.
POOBEAR |
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Re: The Girl
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:52:20 PM AEST
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| A truth of life my friend ...makes me think. Very well done. Larry |
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Re: The Girl
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by robbieb on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 07:41:21 PM AEST
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Very poignant. I'm new here and am enjoying your poetry very much. Thank-You.
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Re: The Girl
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 08:57:19 PM AEST
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Wow..Crow, this is a phenomenal write.... leaves the reader deep in thought...
Jenni |
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Re: The Girl
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by venkat on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 01:14:16 AM AEST
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| similar reply.some where I read ..not in a poem.very nice....venkat |
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Re: The Girl
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:23:06 AM AEST
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| Your words are good for the heart,mind and soul..This is yet another thought provoking,eye opening write :) |
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Re: The Girl
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by jaeann on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:57:27 AM AEST
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| how speechless i feel............. |
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