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Behind My Eyes, Between The Lies
Contributed by
wild_heart_of_fire
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Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 12:30:40 AM in AEST
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Concealing my emotions within this façade
No one can know
The solicitation of my soul, demeaning
Endeavoring in the task of finding myself
among the tragedies of this oblivion
No one will ever know
Gently drifting whispers of the ocean’s tide
Will not bring me serenity
from the screeching,
clawing, and
gnawing of the pitiful creatures inside my head
they reach with there inhuman claws
dripping with the scarlet tears of my throbbing heart
scratching my self-esteem into shattered pieces of piteous matter
they discretely taunt me with their realities of my past
I am in this hellish thing they call a body
A soul
Never to break free
They’ll tear at me until nothing is left
And no one knows
No one will ever know
I am deadened in this palace of frozen grace
With this scorching inferno of soulless emotions
In this location I will eternally linger
My own personal hell, ensnared within my mind
I’m dieing inside.
Wont you come join me?
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Re: Behind My Eyes, Between The Lies
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by chrispywho on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 01:43:39 AM AEST
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| thats pretty intense. bonne chance |
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Re: Behind My Eyes, Between The Lies
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by ArdRi79 on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 09:34:27 PM AEST
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| I know this feeling, the way you wrote this was incredible, the shift from wordplay to graphic imagery showed the mental resoulution and the still continuing inner struggle, the last two lines are heay, were they writtin in sarcasm or was I projecing slef loathing. |
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Re: Behind My Eyes, Between The Lies
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by Archie on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:27:02 PM AEST
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This is a cool poem, you have a lot of courage to post the types of poems that you post. I fret over some of the poems that I post. I am learning to not do that any longer.
This is a very good write. |
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