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Hear Me
Contributed by
crow
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Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 03:52:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My hands have the strength of a thousand men in this, countless warriors in heart
surround me.
If you dare to hurt the woman
and her childern, think of me
not far away, every breath you draw.
Abandon my God for wrath,
struck fear in your heart of the past
let you live.
Pray I find a beautiful child
and her mother, you hide them away.
Brutal hands you keep,
no place is to far..........Crow
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2003-10-25 15:52:25]
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Re: Hear Me
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by Saira on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 04:14:46 PM AEST
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"Pray I find a beautiful child
and her mother, you hide them away.
Brutal hands you keep,
no place is to far.........."
Touchy...touchy...touchy. Great write, Crow.
Saira |
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Re: Hear Me
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 07:06:41 PM AEST
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Soul touching, fellow feeling, rage, kindness, indiginant integrity, oh my Crow....I could go on and on and so, Such character....such soul.
Beauiful meaningful write again again
lovingcritters
You're My Hero
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Re: Hear Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 07:53:00 PM AEST
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Soulful as always...Excellent job!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Hear Me
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 01:50:26 AM AEST
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| I spend so much time trying to fathom your words, because there is soooo much in what you say ... and not to be taken lightly, because you write with sincerity, compassion and depth ... this one no less, beautiful write ... Jan |
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Re: Hear Me
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by Merry on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:20:46 PM AEST
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your writing always touches my heart. so protective, so strong, so honest
this poem has so much quiet passion in it, beautiful write
merry |
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Re: Hear Me
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:45:06 AM AEST
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| Could not hold back the emotions reading this..so many of them.I love it. |
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