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EYES SO VERY BLUE
Contributed by
robbieb
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Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 01:27:33 PM in AEST
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Seen but once on evenings end
appearing rather nice
knowing that impressions first
can be or not a paradise
As real as all that I'd expect
a smile so very bright
words so natural as you spoke
with all to hear polite
Over-bearing not your style
observant and soft-spoken
feeling easy not forseen
and dining with fair token
Among these ones to know you'd like
endless chances to pursue
seeing through and taking in
with eyes so very blue
~ Robbie ~
September 27th, 2000
Copyright ©2003 Robbie
Copyright ©
robbieb
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Re: EYES SO VERY BLUE
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by Philipa on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 02:04:45 PM AEST
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To the point and very well written. Beautiful job robbie and thank you for sharing.
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Re: EYES SO VERY BLUE
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by Saira on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 04:02:55 PM AEST
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Great write!
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Re: EYES SO VERY BLUE
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by Peg on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 07:32:12 PM AEST
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I remember that first meeting and he was nervous, you captured the feelings so very well in this poem, keep up the good work.
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