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3 am
Contributed by
sheigha
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Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 03:20:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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it's 3 am and steady rain
is the only sound
u left me here when all i need
is u to be around
i feel like everything in life
is just coming unwound
and u, one thing i used to count on,
nowhere to be found
so go f*** off and have your fun
while in the rain i drowned
rather than be with u
ill sit on cold wet ground
Copyright ©
sheigha
... [
2003-10-25 03:20:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: 3 am
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rain on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 03:22:32 AM AEST (User
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well written i can almost hear your anger.
~sara~ |
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Re: 3 am
(User Rating: 1 ) by Traumatise on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 03:43:42 AM AEST (User
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I like this poem. It's full of anger..... yet brilliant.
-Traumatise- |
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Re: 3 am
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th January 2008 @ 06:57:48 AM AEST (User
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I can feel your anger pulsating through this poem. Great Job! |
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