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A Cry for Help
Contributed by
sugar0986
on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 07:22:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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He is 6 years old,
and has big dreams,
dreams of being a hero.
If he could,
he would be spider-man,
or maybe even a fire person
as he would say.
He's just a innocent,
but has so much hate
inside of him,
that he doesn't know
how to control.
He lets out
so much pain and anger,
crying for help,
but no one seems to care.
He sits alone
in his room,
with tears streaming
down his face.
Screaming for help
Copyright ©
sugar0986
... [
2003-10-24 19:22:07]
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Re: A Cry for Help
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 07:26:33 PM AEST
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This is so sad...but lovely none the less..
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Re: A Cry for Help
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 07:27:48 PM AEST
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A fine write, I can feel the anger.
Well done. |
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Re: A Cry for Help
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by Saira on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 07:30:28 PM AEST
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Such a touchy write....powerfully and beautifully expressed.
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Re: A Cry for Help
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 06:43:16 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem it's really good, good write |
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Re: A Cry for Help
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by Trisha on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 08:57:46 PM AEST
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| Brittany I really like this. I can say I want to copy this down |
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Re: A Cry for Help
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by Trisha on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 09:05:04 PM AEST
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| Brittany I really like this. I can say I want to copy this down |
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