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I am Dead!
Contributed by
rain
on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 03:45:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I died the day he made me cry.
My tears turned my heart to ice.
Each one that fell made it freeze a little more.
No fire runs through my veins,
I feel no more pain.
I am dead!
To your eyes i look alive.
Its only an illusion.
He punched me and it felt like fire.
Pain shot through my veins.
My body froze.
I am dead!
Each insult i took.
Showing no pain.
Sheding no tears.
I am dead!
I died the day he made me cry.
I was no more than nine.
No one listened when I talked.
No one understood my words.
I tried to tell them all.
No one could see.
I am dead!
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rain
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2003-10-24 15:45:51]
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Re: I am Dead!
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by sugar0986 on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 04:20:17 PM AEST
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| Very moving, It's like I can feel what you are feeling in this poem. it's like I can see it in my head. |
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Re: I am Dead!
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by Saira on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 07:42:36 PM AEST
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Such a heart wrenching poem...very sad but very well expressed. Good work!
Saira |
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Re: I am Dead!
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 02:05:36 AM AEST
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Soundz like your life was worse than hell, I can only hope that somewhere in your life you have found some sort of happiness that you could call yours.
This was an excellent poem, so moving yet so sad. |
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Re: I am Dead!
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 03:12:25 AM AEST
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wow very deep this touched me. Great write.
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