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I hurt you
Contributed by
Puppy_dog_eyes
on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 08:44:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I hurt you, cut you with the knife of my words
Never meaning to cause offence
A fleeting moment I wish I could erase
Like a pencil mark upon a page
I watched you smile,such a warming scene
Eyes so wide, enriched by the day
Misjudging the mood, was I thoughtless and cruel ?
Reaction to my foolishness left me shattered and shocked
In a crazy world maybe I'm crazy too
In my innocence of you did I play the perfect fool ?
I only seek what the others do, please try to understand
The real me more caring than the outward sometimes shows
My emotion is not a shallow pool
I'm drowning in the torrent of a river of regret
The joker, this clown you see before you
Puts on a face, trying to be loved
Please take these words, my deepest plea
I feel dark from the clouds in my mind
To just say sorry in a single word
Like a lovesong without tone
Forgive me is all I am asking
In your heart I am seeking that gift
Much greater than pain I cause sometimes
Is the shame of being me
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Puppy_dog_eyes
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2003-10-24 08:44:05]
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Re: I hurt you
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 09:30:07 AM AEST
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Im sure after reading this all will be well, it takes a huge heart to apologize and this came from your heart.
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Re: I hurt you
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 11:53:15 AM AEST
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Excellent apology, Puppy.... How could she not forgive you after reading this....
Jenni |
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Re: I hurt you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 07:11:08 AM AEST
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| I still do not believe you have hurt.. but.. if.. then this is the nicest apology.. aika:-) |
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