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Nonsense
Contributed by
Saira
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Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 08:13:57 AM in AEST
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Searing…
Within, smothering…
desires, blocking…
thoughts, fading…
eyes, choking…
soul, breaking…
down, maddening…
voices hammering…
head, controlling…
mind, steering…
life, feeling…
worthless, sitting…
clueless, writing…
nonsense, pretending…
sane, running…
somewhere, standing…
nowhere, killing…
time, falling…
down, destroying…
me, loosing…
myself, breathing…
distrust, seeing…
indifference, listening…
them, forgetting…
myself, keeping…
silence, faking…
smile, within dying!
Copyright ©
Saira
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2003-10-24 08:13:57]
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Re: Nonsense
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 09:31:16 AM AEST
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intense moods enjoyable write with a great style
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Re: Nonsense
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 11:36:58 AM AEST
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| u have great turn for nonsense saira ; ) I just feel it describes what I go through,from start to end, "searing within, smothering desire.....," way to go. by the way shld i take aguess who's ur ( or our) nonsensical friend? : ) ------ kj (Another Crab) |
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Re: Nonsense
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 05:47:43 PM AEST
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very different !....nice wordings i like it.
love ya ,
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Re: Nonsense
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 11:48:22 PM AEST
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Wow, Saira,
I think that was very moving.I remembering feeling just like that when I wrote depression. It's sort of like you are reeling!
well, done, really enjoyed that...please tell your friend...I'm glad she talked you into sharing it with us!
lovingcritters
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Re: Nonsense
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by Crow on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 01:44:13 PM AEST
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| cool! good write, Crow |
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Re: Nonsense
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by venkat on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 06:09:24 AM AEST
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| very cool. well done..venkat |
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