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Corrosion
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 06:09:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The gleaming, shining youth
A sight for all to see
A world inside we all rely
The home of joy and glee
It rubs away as time's sands rush through
scratching, chipping, breaking
The more we wait the more it's too late
Greying, dying, fading
It has no end
For that is death
And all are victims to fall
It strikes with stealth
You'll never know
--Until you've lost it all---
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EternitysLyre
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2003-10-24 06:09:32]
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Re: Corrosion
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 06:12:06 AM AEST
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| i know exactly what you mean, this is a good right, i enjoyed it... x |
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Re: Corrosion
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 11:27:42 AM AEST
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Really good...great metaphors..
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