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Set Me Free
Contributed by
Traumatise
on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 01:49:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I feel so trapped
Everything they say are crapped
I am about to snapped
My death will look like a mishapped
I feel so lonely
My world starts to look eerie
I need to be free badly
Or else it will turn blurry
Stop making me cry
By singing me lullaby
I just wanna shut my eye
And dream that I could fly
I beg you to set me free
Set me free from misery
Stop making me moody
And not forgetting grumpy
Why can’t you see
I’m beginning to feel druggie
Everything looks foggy
All I can say is "I'm sorry"
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Traumatise
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2003-10-24 01:49:43]
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Re: Set Me Free
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 04:12:45 AM AEST
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| I think this is a really good poem, It shows emotion and truth about how you feel. Its good that your able to admit how you feel. Keep up the good writing, Because good writing can be about crap things. - Stacy. |
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Re: Set Me Free
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 08:00:19 PM AEST
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Expression comes in many forms as does freedom from pain,writing poetry is a great outlet for freeing that inner pain.Keep it up,hence you will free yourself.
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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