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a new scar
Contributed by
rain
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Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 11:58:51 PM in AEST
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Harsh words that you speak
Tears that refuse to fall
A blood stained blade
And a new scar.
Laughter at my expense
Pain that won't leave
A blood stained blade
And a new scar.
"That girl, who is she?"
"Oh her, no one."
A blood stained blade
And a new scar.
You always prove me wrong.
Pain that wont leave
A blood stained blade
And a new scar.
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Re: a new scar
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 12:00:32 AM AEST
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| So painful, but beautiful imagery.....Awesome poem! Peace be with you always! |
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Re: a new scar
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by Cancer on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 12:11:01 AM AEST
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brutal in it's truth, and sorrowful in it's message. beautiful.
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Re: a new scar
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 12:28:01 AM AEST
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I can relate to this so much... This spoke to me very deeply I hope to see more from you you definitely have a talent.
Bobo (joel) |
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Re: a new scar
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 02:16:17 AM AEST
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awesome wording liked this poem, made an impression upon me.
Keep it up |
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