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Changes
Contributed by
Elf
on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 05:41:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Changing faces,
Changing minds.
Friends forgotten
Left behind.
Change can be good
There is no doubt,
But leaves behind so many.
Leaves them without.
Without a friend,
Who can say,
That we don't need them.
More changes today.
For with no friend,
you give no life.
You've no one to tell
your troubles and strife.
With no one to share
your deepest thoughts
You will have too much change.
More than you thought.
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2003-10-23 17:41:04]
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Re: Changes
(User Rating: 1 )
by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 04:26:13 AM AEST
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| I really really like this. I think because it tells truth about life. Very well written. Good Job. - Stacy. |
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Re: Changes
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by mercedes on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 11:19:08 AM AEST
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| I also like this one. Its simple but tells a good point. Remember you are your own worst critic. |
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