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Within Mars' View
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 05:33:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Traveling through time
within my darkened dreams
loss of morality the crime
valued every scheme.
Kindred spirits uncommon
a lecture every day
which side to fall upon
all the rules go grey.
The tension so galllantly high
power of the dark one
absence only makes one cry
and leaves you stunned.
Corrupted and at a loss
think not for any while
at all of it at what the cost
turn back the clock dial.
Take not the shot
of picture perfect
connection so hot
the ache was direct.
Hurried phone calls
license plate rendevous
that voice enthralls
unable to brew.
Open up the doorway
down the rabbit hole
not a long enough stay
too much love to dole.
The dreamer is destined
to feel the heat of night
the deal is tested
walk away from sight.
Sit upon the moon
walk the carefree path
all you think is ..... soon
relish in the thickened wrath.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-10-23 17:33:34]
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Re: Within Mars' View
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 07:20:13 PM AEST
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| There is so much in your poetry that is deep and sometimes difficult to decipher ... but you write so well and with such emotion ... great write ... Jan |
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Re: Within Mars' View
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM AEST
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| this is so good, so beautiful. i can't begin to know all this poem means to you, but it reached me on several levels. you have created a mood as well as told your tale. painted_echos |
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Re: Within Mars' View
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 01:10:21 PM AEST
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| Beatiful write. |
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