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Distance
Contributed by
crow
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Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 03:38:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I wander in the misted jungles,
just beyond the lights.
Search my heart,
wash my sins
in dew of approaching dawn.
Who am I to hope,
what shadows must I keep.
I stray along the rivers edge,
life around begins its day...... wonder of my distance... Crow
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Re: Distance
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by painted_echos on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 03:46:03 PM AEST
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| always a wonderful write...i really like this one. i can see it and feel it. (ty, have been away and will be, but will come back...always, i like to read your poetry). m |
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Re: Distance
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 04:09:07 PM AEST
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touches deep within the soul as always
Shari |
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Re: Distance
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by POOBEAR on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 04:25:28 PM AEST
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Hi Crow,
Your writing is always so deep and I really
love your style.This is truly impressive.
POOBEAR |
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Re: Distance
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 07:21:46 PM AEST
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"Search my heart,
wash my sins
in dew of approaching dawn."
Neat lines :)
Sounds lovely . |
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Re: Distance
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 07:22:41 PM AEST
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| Deep and thoughtful write ... I liked this one ... Jan |
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Re: Distance
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by venkat on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 03:09:31 AM AEST
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| Thoughtful..and ..beautiful. venkat |
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Re: Distance
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by Saira on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 08:24:53 AM AEST
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Beautiful! I love each and every line of it. You write very well.
Saira |
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