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Captured forever.
Contributed by
bhavnas
on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 08:26:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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When the sun will set ,
And my hair be white,
Reclining on my chair,
I will ponder for a little while.
I’ll look back with shine in my eyes ,
At the moments I presently hide.
The moments that make me complete,
My energies replete.
It will be different ,
Then and now,
You make me weak-kneed ,but how?
May be I’d know then if not now.
Your one glance
had me in a trance ,
A meeting perchance!
Life unfolds its own mysteries ,
I had heard ,
To see it unfolding before me ,
Like this I had never discerned.
You made me know,
That dreams do come true
So what if they are fulfilled late ,
Your arrival was worth the wait.
This is what I’ll relish ,
Cushioned in my chair,
When I’d be old and grey haired.
No matter wherever you go ,
Further ,further and more further away ,
Forget not
That someone will grow fonder with every passing day.
Blow ,blow ,blow oh!breeze
Sway my chair,
in these memories make me fast asleep.
Capture these moments in my closed eyes .
Since my beloved says ,
we all need to pay a price .
So darling now u need to pay it too
To have come to my life ,
And make it anew.
Now forever be imprisoned in my eyes,
till they become wrinkled and droopy at the sides.
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bhavnas
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2003-10-23 08:26:23]
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Re: Captured forever.
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by venkat on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 06:07:07 AM AEST
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Wow..it is wonderful..you have just captivated me with this poem..
"Your one glance had me in a trance"
"in these memories make me fast asleep.
Capture these moments in my closed eyes .Since my beloved says ,we all need to pay a price .So darling now u need to pay it too..To have come to my life ,And make itanew. Now forever be imprisoned in my eyes,
till they become wrinkled and droopy at the sides."
very very beautiful lines..matured thoughts and matured style..
thanks for sharing your beautiful poem. venkat
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Re: Captured forever.
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 05:51:15 AM AEST
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| you made me know.......brilliant!!!! |
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Re: Captured forever.
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by Darbi on
Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 08:35:20 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful, and different from what I've seen so far ! |
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