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This Time
Contributed by
EmSal
on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 07:49:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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To whom it may concern,
This time I am on my last thread.
I still have no one to whom to turn,
As I sit here knowing this time I will succeed, and be dead.
Last time I did not succeed because I was scared.
I was still in so much pain but the time was not right.
This time I will succeed, I am ready, I am prepared.
This soul, this body, this time it is ready to lose this fight.
This mind is damaged, it does not understand,
Why people want to live longer than they should.
Life for me will always taste bland,
And the way I feel about it now, I wouldn't change the taste of it even if I could.
This letter is for anyone who wants to know.
As I lose grip on my life I bleed,
And I am slowly being escourted to death row.
These last few words I will let you read.
Signed the no one you once knew,
From the times once passed by,
Walking down my dark, lonely life's avenue,
I couldn't help but to think of you as I purposely die.
Copyright ©
EmSal
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2003-10-23 07:49:34]
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Re: This Time
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 08:05:02 AM AEST
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Ohh Emma, this is very sad, so emotional and filled with so much turmoil. I haven't read any of your poems for a while, well I haven't been on for a while so that's probably why, but this poem is amazing.
-hugsies- stacey |
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Re: This Time
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by mercedes on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 10:03:34 AM AEST
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| The poem was well written but so very sad. I just hope you are ok. |
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Re: This Time
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by bhavnas on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 02:02:16 PM AEST
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when depression sets in ,
n thers's silence midst din,
that we choose death to life,
n contemplate suicide......
Beautifully expressed write. |
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Re: This Time
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by Crow on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 03:46:36 PM AEST
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| what a great write, my best thought for you. Crow |
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Re: This Time
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 05:07:55 PM AEST
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| Ohhhh honey......sad and tragic, bring such tears to my eyes..... such beautiful words describing a tragic act.... You are never alone! Awesome poem! |
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Re: This Time
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by tissueshaveissues on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:21:01 PM AEST
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| wow...that is really sad but good. |
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