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Fear
Contributed by
crow
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Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 02:50:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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Fear tastes sweet to me,
so wonder whats under the bed.
Shiver as you look through the cracks,
lie quiet break no twigs,
contrive I`m not there.
That one little slip,
and I rise to take it all,
leave you timid, and weak
afraid of the dark.
Few have ever conquered me
a relentless spirit you create.
You must live as human, and I?
Always to have a home...... Crow
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crow
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2003-10-23 02:50:38]
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Re: Fear
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by venkat on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 02:58:55 AM AEST
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| Awww very very beautiful..almost thrilling. venkat |
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Re: Fear
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 04:02:58 AM AEST
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| Very spooky! Awesome poem! |
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Re: Fear
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 04:46:44 AM AEST
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| very creepy.......hair rising!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Fear
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 05:25:44 AM AEST
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I like this was a lot
good work
Shari |
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Re: Fear
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 08:05:02 AM AEST
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| *shudders and looks over shoulder*..Thanks Crow..now I will be checking under the bed for the next week lol..This is great! :) |
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Re: Fear
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by Saira on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 08:28:38 AM AEST
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Great write!
Saira |
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