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Sunnier Day
Contributed by
humphdj
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Wednesday, 21st August 2002 @ 09:18:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Silently sullenly longingly sigh
Helplessly tremblingly quietly cry
Selflessly gently saying goodbye
Falsely but bravely winking your eye
Loved them so much, you thought you would die
Pick yourself up? You can’t even try
Lost your whole world, and still don’t know why
You say your ok! But know it’s a lie
Blindly restlessly finding your way
Hiding your heart till the sky is less grey
Selfishly struggle and damn what they say
Slowly unwrapping a sunnier day
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humphdj
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2002-08-21 09:18:53]
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Re: Sunnier Day
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 21st August 2002 @ 12:16:48 PM AEST
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This is nice, Dave..I know the feelings..
Jenni |
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Re: Sunnier Day
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by ginsdance on
Wednesday, 21st August 2002 @ 12:30:08 PM AEST
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This is great! Let us hope that their is more sunshine out their for all of us!
Gin |
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Re: Sunnier Day
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by Chrissie on
Friday, 23rd August 2002 @ 09:00:29 AM AEST
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I missed this yesterday! It's beautiful, poignant and has made me cry......I love your poetry.
(and since Ihave only just told you a moment ago that I had a good day today...I think you should buy me the box of tissues I now need ;) ) |
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Re: Sunnier Day
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by chatabox on
Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 10:39:28 PM AEST
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As you left and said your goodbyes,
you forgot to tell my heart
how to live without you.
equisite poetry Dave.
Pen.
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Re: Sunnier Day
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by Patricia_Petro on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 09:29:33 PM AEST
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Hi Dave,
"...Slowly unwrapping a sunnier day."
So true...very nice and warm. Beautiful poem.
~Patricia
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Re: Sunnier Day
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 02:14:07 AM AEST
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Dear Dave @-<-<<-
I love this one! What a super write! You had my interest from your first line all the way.. left me wanting more.. may all your days be sunny my friend, always Nessa |
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