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She's Beautiful
Contributed by
Modest
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Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 09:54:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She's beautiful, I'd give anyhting to be her. From her mind to her body to her silk thicky hair.
She's really beautiful and she doesn't know it. Shes real beautiful, hiding behind her clothes she never shows it.
She walks unproudly with her head up high full of confidence and no shame, if beautiful and precious were playing pieces then she would be the game.
She sits quietly in the corner as she reads a book, she's invisible to the world no one dare gives her a look.
She so beautiful and everyone knows it but her. She's so beautiful that when guys talk to her they slurr.
She's beautiful with her pretty brown eyes, she WAS ONCE beautiful, on the was once I emphisized.
See, she was always beautiful but she never knew it for herself.
Her esteem was really low, which led to her very last beath.
She thought about the times when she was full of life's bliss.
She thought about the rough times before she slashed her wrist.
Her memory still lives on, our love for her will never fade.
A beautiful person deserves beautiful flowers even from the craddle to the grave.
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Modest
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2003-10-22 21:54:38]
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Re: She's Beautiful
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 10:49:58 PM AEST
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Wow!
This is such an awesome write! It brings one 2 tears and that's hard when it comes 2 me. Very powerfull tribute to someone that probably is your angel now.
God certainly understands our human frustrations in life and death even tho self inflicted.
I embrace life noe but something like this would have certainly have eased my past pain.
I can't stress enuff the words here are magic. I'm so sorry for your loss but u know her luv is eternal.
We had an older man in my town commit suicide about five days ago. He worked with my two daughters.
Everyone is in shock!
poems like this one will make a person think twice, I'm sure.
Keep up the good work!
peace, joy, luv,
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Re: She's Beautiful
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by Rain on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 05:55:21 PM AEST
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wow!... what can i say... that was great.. i love it... wonderfully written.
~sara~ |
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