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better then you
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 04:54:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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you know somthing?
im a better person when im with you
even though
you make me feel like nothing
because i can look at you drugged up to your eye balls picking on somone because their diffrent
and i can think "im better then you"
even though i watch you do things that were wrong
i never let you change my opinions
you only changed me for good
you didnt make me"your kinda person"
i want you to know that
you see
you didnt make me look bad
because compared to you i always shined
and now that your gone
i dont look to good
and im with the kind peaple so its not that i should
see im exactly where i want to be where i fit in
so forget about me now
because i dont want to watch you mess up
as long as your being you your just not good enought
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2003-10-22 04:54:52]
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Re: better then you
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by Daniel on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 05:38:39 AM AEST
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| a touch of sugar, some salt to the wounds, and spellcheck will make everything all better... okay okay, i jest. but the salt may actually work! lol, good write; it sounds familiar to a lot of old memories. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: better then you
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 05:49:05 AM AEST
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All rite!
U got it going on now!
I know the feeling very well!
Very good, positive write!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: better then you
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by Chanti on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 01:53:39 AM AEST
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| Ahhh i can relate... Ive been in the same situations with some people and now i look back at them, and i think 'your really messing up.' Great write! |
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