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Death of the Insane
Contributed by
blackfire9786
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Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 11:24:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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I saw a boy today on the stairs
I closed my eyes but still saw him there.
My parents don’t see him, they say I’m insane
I don’t care, just make him go away
I met a new friend today
People say I’m crazy this way
People must be liars, I just don’t see
How the only one who knows her is me.
Please help me, I think I’m slipping away
From all that I know, I think I’m going insane
Reality is slipping, distinctions getting harder to make
I wish I wish they’d go away.
I met someone else a while ago
But he wasn’t like the others I know
He laughed at me, called me dumb
He said I lost and he has won.
He seemed darker than most my friends
Something about him scared me then.
His eyes flashed and then I was gone
I don’t know where I went or for how long
But when my awareness finally returned
I don’t think I was still on earth
I saw on my wrist, two neat blood wells
And with all my tormenting friends
Looked onto hell.
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Re: Death of the Insane
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by Rain on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 11:59:50 PM AEST
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| i find i like this for some reason i cant defiine it touched me in some unknown way awoke so sleeping part of my brain and strangley or should i say insanely i relate to it. |
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Re: Death of the Insane
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by Modest on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 01:37:58 AM AEST
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Hey Modest here!
whew! that was a good poem i think i understood it but the beauty of art is its many interpretations. i really liked it, keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Death of the Insane
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 01:49:27 AM AEST
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| i really dig this poem, its awesome. i love it... |
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