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choices,hard to make.
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 05:53:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Can i live?while living a lie.
can i achieve without being decieve.
can i survive if i don't try.
the puzzles of life make one cry.
strength comes when one overcome,
the problems one face,hear life dramer.
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RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2003-10-21 17:53:32]
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Re: choices,hard to make.
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by POOBEAR on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 06:39:32 PM AEST
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Hello Richard,
This write is really great and I think it
brings up a subject "the puzzles of life"
that can frustrate all of us.
Your Friend,
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Re: choices,hard to make.
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by Philipa on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 08:39:08 PM AEST
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Richard, the answers to all those questions is...yes. But that won't make you happy. Find what makes you happy and stick with it. Keep writing. One beef...what is the last word suppose to be? PM me if you wish.
Peace,
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