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''Unconscious''
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
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Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 05:36:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Images flash before my eyes
blurry, blinding fear
Fear of loss, fear of hurt
Fear of falling tears
Restless resting
Sleepless sleep
Tne nightmare pervades me
A ruined heap
It's all over
I've had enough
But I'll be fine...
when I wake up
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2003-10-21 05:36:36]
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Re: ''Unconscious''
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 05:39:40 AM AEST
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| a real gift.. |
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Re: ''Unconscious''
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 02:21:15 PM AEST
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ok. constructive criticism. I like the flow,yes, but the last stanza has no rhyming scheme as the rest of the poem.
ok question. Do you fear sleep? So true,a curse and a gift. You have a lovely gift.
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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