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Audition For The Boiz

Contributed by ml03 on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 01:22:26 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Down
On your knees
Want to give
Want to die
Lie
And freak
Or
Say it
And say it
Loud
Pants up
Next line
No short brains
Here

I'm
Lookin' for a 9
For a 10
Look it up
And done
Does it stroke
Your fancy
Is he good enough
For tonight
Or
Is he
Not even that good
Or
Is he
Mister one night stand
That just
Won't go away

Mister
Mister
DON'T GET INVOVLED
No love
No attachment
No heart
No emotion
Its about body
In the flesh
And nothin' else
I don't love you
So
Don't love me

The end
No tears
No words
No emails
Or phone calls
Walk away
And dissappear
I hope you had fun
And goodbye
You didn't get the part
Hope you had fun
Auditioning
Though

Copyright © ml03 ... [ 2003-10-21 01:22:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Audition For The Boiz (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 01:23:36 AM AEST
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i'm kinda at a loss on how to describe the reason i like this, or on what level it hit me. but, who cares, i liked it.

"I don't love you
So
Don't love me"

i understand that completely. great write.

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