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when illusions fail
Contributed by
derwydd
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Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 11:28:45 PM in AEST
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The peace of deceit after the storm;
All around has fallen,
And I am left in the ashes to wonder,
Why did I build so high
Upon the sands?
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derwydd
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2003-10-20 23:28:45]
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Re: when illusions fail
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by Schnikes13 on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 11:33:11 PM AEST
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So short, yet so powerful.
I totally felt the emotion.
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Re: when illusions fail
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 11:34:45 PM AEST
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Really good write.... "Food For Thought"
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Re: when illusions fail
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by ginsdance on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 12:37:12 AM AEST
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I think we all wonder that from time to time. In fact, I'm coming off a huge reality check. Thanks for letting me know that it happens to other people too. Great write!
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