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Contributed by Rawjer on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 11:13:36 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Stars shining everythings so brite here
mend the wounds make all the damage disapear
and the mistakes that have scared your face
will be washed away with the sins of mortallity

Scars hiding everythings so fake here
focused on what I cant reach
shadowed by a misleading appearance
its disguise will make you deny

All that you have known before
is erased and you swore
that you never were the one
never had anyone
only focused on what had to be done
blood runs through my veins
I have a heart and soul
but the question still remains
how can you focus when your so blind

is there something wrong here
when im the only one who feels like dieing
knee deep in mud I keep sinking
trapped like a rat still I fight to hold on a little longer

spaced out with a feeling so disgusted
with myself why did you do it
everything about this is so unreal
focused on the scars you try to conceil

All that you have known before
is erased and you swore
that you never were the one
never had anyone
only focused on what had to be done
blood runs through my veins
I have a heart and soul
but the question still remains
how can you focus when your so blind

I rub my eyes there so blurry
I really need to focus
well on my way
to split the day
in with the twisting of us
blink blink squint focus

All that you have known before
is erased and you swore
that you never were the one
never had anyone
only focused on what had to be done
blood runs through my veins
I have a heart and soul
but the question still remains
how can you focus when your so blind

Copyright © Rawjer ... [ 2003-10-20 23:13:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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