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Unquestionable Power
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 08:31:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Everyone
was there
then everyone
went on.
No one's energy
to fill
the room,
no one's
comfort.
The chasm
of the
silence
is all that
lived
on
after
you.
Copyright ©
jaeann
... [
2003-10-20 20:31:22]
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Re: Unquestionable Power
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 08:34:34 PM AEST
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an over powering silence...well written
Shari |
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Re: Unquestionable Power
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by sicknivesevered on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 09:57:53 PM AEST
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| I feel your pain. You wrote this well. Excellent work. |
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Re: Unquestionable Power
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 01:54:03 AM AEST
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| Good.. venkat |
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Re: Unquestionable Power
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 03:52:26 AM AEST
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Silence can be deading, Jayme...remember what once was, but is now gone.
Life is constant adjustments, and then even more adjustments, as we reach to fulfill, there are more adjustment still. Take a small step each day. A Baby step will be fine....will carry you a small way, but don't stop ever to listen to the still!
Deep and provocative, Jaymee, is so like your write.
Love you,
ConSue |
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Re: Unquestionable Power
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 12:20:34 PM AEST
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Silence may be lonely and deafening,but your words spoke poetic VOLUMES!
i like this one,too! :-)
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Unquestionable Power
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 06:26:11 PM AEST
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| this is as lonly as I have ever read, empty book. Crow super good |
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