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lonely fighter
Contributed by
sheigha
on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:55:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You all share the pedastal
And I'm somewhere below
I HATE feeling so miniscule
Lost when cold winds blow
My tears are turned to icicles
as in wastelands I rest
I gaze up towards your levels
Knowing, THERE it is the best
If only I could fight my way
All alone I try
Someday in that paradise
With you, I'll finally fly
Copyright ©
sheigha
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2003-10-20 19:55:57]
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Re: lonely fighter
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 10:33:19 PM AEST
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Hang tough, have patience.. some day, you WILL fly..... nice write...
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Re: lonely fighter
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by Calista on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 12:21:50 AM AEST
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wow i thought that was really great
keep on writing
youre great at it
~calista |
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