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Re: Buried Candles
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 06:59:36 PM AEST
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very moving
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Re: Buried Candles
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:36:45 PM AEST
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wow o wow.....so dark and very well expressed..I love the imagery
Today,I can relate :) |
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Re: Buried Candles
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by jaeann on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 08:28:44 PM AEST
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| breathtaking............... |
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Re: Buried Candles
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 01:41:30 AM AEST
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Aaah, very strong, and powerful lines..depth of emotion endless.."Shattered dreams lacerated her eyes, Gave crimson tears way to flow dry, Spread their bruised wings, soared high, In complete turmoil, into the ashen sky.".. great.. venkat
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Re: Buried Candles
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 04:05:54 AM AEST
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Oh Siara, and amazing write.
I felt the sadness, the emptiness clear to the bottom of my toes.
As I was reading my heart froze, in the middle of the moonless night.
Numbed by the loss of light!
I hate darkness, so this poem was really chilly for me.Well done!
Wonderful dark poetry.
Love you dear friend,
Connie Sue |
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Re: Buried Candles
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by kalika_vidya on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 06:58:40 AM AEST
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| wonderful write.. great talent. K |
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Re: Buried Candles
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 02:36:11 PM AEST
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Wow! You did exceptionally well on the imagery here! I love the aura that this darkness emits,yet lulls me into a night of wonder! Great job!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Buried Candles
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by Zee on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 04:25:33 PM AEST
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Once again an amazing exhibit of striking imagery! You are always at the best on your hand!! Great write!!
Zee |
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Re: Buried Candles
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 06:36:40 PM AEST
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| this is outstanding! great job. Crow |
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Re: Buried Candles
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 08:49:05 PM AEST
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| "shattered dreams lacerated her eyes..." "fingers so benumbed to kindle any light.." simply exquisite play of words; the mood kind of remind me of "wuthering heights", the same gloomy darkness seems to engulf. ---kj (Another Crab) |
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