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Not Your Little Princess
Contributed by
Serendippitty
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Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 05:16:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'm not your little princess,
not anymore
I'm not that sweet little girl
I was when I was four
I'm not as perfect
as I used to be
I no longer play with dolls
or cry when I scrape my knee
I am a teen
emotional, wild, and mean.
I am no longer a princess...
for now I am a queen!
Soon I'll want the keys
and a little extra cash
for a new outfit
or the football party bash
Soon we'll disagree
and call each other names
And not speak to one another
and other stupid games
This will build a wall
separating me and you
I'll go and have some fun
like other kids will do
Because...
I'm not your little princess
not anymore
better knock down that wall...
before I walk out that door
Copyright ©
Serendippitty
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2003-10-20 17:16:35]
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Re: Not Your Little Princess
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 05:26:16 PM AEST
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This is a great poem and I can see where you are coming from with it - I went through something similar. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Not Your Little Princess
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 05:33:55 PM AEST
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It's tough for Dads to see that their little girls have grown up. In fact they are usually the last to realize it. As time passes both of you will see a bit more clearly just what the other is going through now. This is a right of passage for fathers and daughters my friend. He will learn to let go and you will one day see it wasnt so bad to be Daddy's little princess. :o)
Very well done!
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Re: Not Your Little Princess
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:08:58 PM AEST
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Lovely write..and I tend to agree with larry here...
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Re: Not Your Little Princess
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by Serendippitty on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:22:29 PM AEST
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I'm happy you all liked my poem, but it has nothing to do with me and my dad at all... actually it is to my entire family. They don't realize that I am not two years old anymore... I just had to clarify that, so you won't get the wrong impression by reading my poem
Thanks,
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Re: Not Your Little Princess
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by Saira on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:27:39 PM AEST
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Very nicely written.
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Re: Not Your Little Princess
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 08:21:27 PM AEST
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As a teen myself, I of course can relate to this. Parents need to learn when to let go and realize their little babies are all grown up. Great write, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Re: Not Your Little Princess
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by ginsdance on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 12:13:31 AM AEST
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I'm going through that with my mother right now. She just can't seem to get used to the fact that I'm really grown up and getting married. I also went through this with my father when I was 14... which wasn't that long ago. I think parents usually realize when it's time to let go... after they get over their "empty nest syndrome".
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Re: Not Your Little Princess
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by Menelaus on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 10:12:22 PM AEST
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| Hmmmmm.........we deconstructed the Iron Curtain 10 years ago, and now you're building another? |
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