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Another Soul Has Left
Contributed by
maryetta
on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 02:55:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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another soul has left tonight
released with a double edged sword
glad the suffer was over
sad to lose one so loved
another soul has left tonight
release was a blessing to all
suffering was ever so much
family mourns the loss so deeply
another soul has left tonight
release was ever so sad
dreams so well planned
left behind all thir lives
another soul has left tonight
released to one who always was
the tragic loss to all was felt
but release was needed
because another soul has left tonight
Copyright ©
maryetta
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2003-10-20 14:55:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Another Soul Has Left
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 04:14:09 PM AEST (User
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Death is a very perplexing thing. You're right, there is sadness and there is relief. A truly sad write. |
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Re: Another Soul Has Left
(User Rating: 1 ) by maryetta on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 05:14:56 PM AEST (User
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thank you for your recent post.
maryetta |
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Re: Another Soul Has Left
(User Rating: 1 ) by ski901 on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 07:52:42 PM AEST (User
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very nice poem, it really captures death |
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