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Where you might be
Contributed by
crow
on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 12:47:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Whenever my heart leads me to,
that warm gentle place in the past.
Whenever the tears, bring you around,
there is never a cloud in the sky.
Whenever the thoughts, of a perfect love,
rush over me once in a while.
Whenever the dreams put me in your arms,
I wonder if you feel it too.
Whenever my mind,
chases butterflies and love,
and wonder just where you might be....Crow
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Re: Where you might be
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by Philipa on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 02:22:08 PM AEST
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Very soothing and comforting. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Where you might be
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 02:26:11 PM AEST
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I am sure she does
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Re: Where you might be
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by Saira on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 04:44:16 PM AEST
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Heart warming and lovely write, Crow. Good work!
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Re: Where you might be
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 06:49:40 PM AEST
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| A lovely dreamy write ... Jan |
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Re: Where you might be
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:03:09 PM AEST
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These thoughts remind me of one who may be lying in the darkness..remembering.
Its a teary one alright ..thanks:)
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Re: Where you might be
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by jaeann on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 08:07:59 PM AEST
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| i love the very last lines.......perfect!!!!! |
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