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IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 04:30:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Crisp leaves, crisp breeze felt.
Tiny chips of Chrystal wink!
Shy Moon hides his face!
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lovingcritters
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2003-10-20 04:30:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 04:33:10 AM AEST (User
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Very good haiku it is!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 06:21:26 AM AEST (User
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looking at the moon through crisp leaves..at mid night is a charming experience. venkat |
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Re: IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:21:30 AM AEST (User
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Keep it up, Connie..great work..
Will answer your pm after work tonight..ok
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 08:19:27 AM AEST (User
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Im so glad you are enjoying haiku.This is a lovely "lil" piece ;)
My kids say I could never write it,as I just go on and on and on LOL!!
Keep em comin' Smiles*
Sharon |
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Re: IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crow on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 01:09:58 PM AEST (User
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Connie, this is so cool! and I love to read them. Crow |
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Re: IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 02:36:22 PM AEST (User
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well done
Shari |
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Re: IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by norm on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 04:45:32 PM AEST (User
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it is beautiful
the blinking stars are telling
The moon knows it all
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Re: IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 08:06:32 PM AEST (User
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i love these haikus of yours!!!!!!! |
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Re: IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by Glo on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 05:30:47 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful Connie, it's so Autumnish! I love it. Please continue to post more. So much can be said with so few words. Thanks for the post.
Glo! |
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