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life
Contributed by
razberryice
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Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 11:48:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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life is like a carasoul
round and round it goes
where it leads or where it stops
no one really knows
the view is always changing
the ride it sometimes slows
the sun will be out one minute
the next the cold wind blows
you stay on for amusement
watching each passing thing
waiting to see next
what the rest will bring
takes it as it comes
and enjoy each sensation
savor every minute
of each and every rotation
Copyright ©
razberryice
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2003-10-19 23:48:37]
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Re: life
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 12:18:01 AM AEST
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| this is so true, great poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: life
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by emystar on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 04:43:48 AM AEST
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Very good work here!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: life
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by olive on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 01:20:52 AM AEST
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| Very interesting and wise words.....especially the last stanza.....beautiful poem |
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