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Its All Over *
Contributed by
Chanti
on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 10:28:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Maybe if i shut my eyes,
block my ears,
then i wont hear,
and i wont see,
just who i am,
and all that i have come to be,
the things ive said,
without control,
suddenly,
they take theyre toll,
the world starts to close in on me,
ruthless demons wont let me be,
making me pay for all ive done,
to think id ever thought id won,
suddenly i know ive lost,
everything i loved is the cost,
every person i pretended to love,
suddenly they are all that i can think of,
but now its too late,
nowhere to turn,
somehow I know,
Ill never learn...
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2003-10-19 22:28:41]
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Re: Its All Over *
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by emystar on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 04:50:05 AM AEST
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I hear what u r saying loud-n-clear.
I can certainly relate to these feelings.
Good writing and hang tuff. I still keep strieving!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Its All Over *
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 01:54:12 PM AEST
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Those last 2 lines captured me perfectly this hurt to read I felt as if you captured me more perfectly than I ever could. A great write although painful to read.
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