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Immortal Bliss
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 09:28:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Watching you sleep so soundlessly
each little move you make
Tho, with my hunger growing
I pray you do not wake,
You roll over quickly
positioning yourself for easy feast
Unaware of my presence
You fear only your dream's beast,
Leaning over your sleeping body
to your neck I lower my head
My teeth, enlongated,
slide effortlessly into your neck
As I ease my way into your bed.
The taste of your plasma
sends an erotic sensation down my spine
Your eyes open, without shock
Oh I must make you mine,
With my blood covered lips
I kiss you so deep I taste your soul
You begin kissing my neck
And your hands start to roam.
I see the little touch of light
beginning to fill the sky
I jump to my feet, tell you all
and flee to my lair, you and I.
Now That I have found you, my partner
We can now live together in Immortal bliss
Feeding on the soul of others,
You my Own, And I your Vampyress.
Copyright ©
PsychoticDreamz
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2003-10-19 21:28:12]
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Re: Immortal Bliss
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by Philipa on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 09:44:26 PM AEST
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Both provacotive and frightning vampires make interesing subjects. Your poem was good and I enjoyed reading it.
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Re: Immortal Bliss
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 10:18:50 PM AEST
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Awesome poem! I love it!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Immortal Bliss
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 11:04:34 PM AEST
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| Ooooh ... dark and erotic ... love this ... Jan |
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Re: Immortal Bliss
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 01:52:30 PM AEST
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Eeek! Better and somehow more dark than your previous one. Truly written by one who possesses talent.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Immortal Bliss
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by Saira on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:33:52 PM AEST
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Very captivating....Love it!
Saira |
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Re: Immortal Bliss
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by SinfullyTwisted on
Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 10:21:19 AM AEST
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| This was lovely. I agree with the others, dark and beautiful. Great job. Keep it up. |
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