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Vampyric Lonliness
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 08:57:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The sun has fallen
Darkness floods the land
Fear consumes
any mortal man,
Awakening, I smile bright
lifting the lid of my tomb
The Hunger eating away at my mind
Must find someone to consume,
Walking through the corridor
Imagining the perfect meal
Must keep in mind He must stay alive
Tonight isn't for the kill,
I must search for my mate
before the sun does rise
For if I fail, I must dwell
Alone til the end of time..
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PsychoticDreamz
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2003-10-19 20:57:52]
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Re: Vampyric Lonliness
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 09:09:55 PM AEST
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this poem had a deep dark beautiful quality to it.
I loved it, keep it up |
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Re: Vampyric Lonliness
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 11:01:49 PM AEST
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| I love this poem ... great imagery ... Jan |
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Re: Vampyric Lonliness
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by SinfullyTwisted on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 10:45:06 AM AEST
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| Lovely imagery. Great write. Keep it up. |
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Re: Vampyric Lonliness
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 01:36:23 PM AEST
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oooh very nice created some dark imagery in my mind great job.
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