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Dear,
Contributed by
Starr
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Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 08:53:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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It's cold in here
I need you near,
I'm never warm without you, Dear.
I need your arms
To sleep at night,
I need your eyes like stars need light.
Copyright ©
Starr
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2003-10-19 08:53:45]
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Re: Dear,
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 10:40:22 AM AEST
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This is very good.
Well done. |
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Re: Dear,
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 12:06:34 PM AEST
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| its very good, but i think you have more of this poem in you, this short piece has impact, and is so romantic, go with it:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Dear,
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by katzie on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 08:50:39 PM AEST
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| Well I think it's sweet. I also think there's a slight lack of self-confidence nearby... |
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