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Haiku #1
Contributed by
ZeroCool
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Tuesday, 20th August 2002 @ 08:24:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Tossed, broken, left for dead
People laughing kicking dead
Angel screams for peace
Copyright ©
ZeroCool
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2002-08-20 20:24:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Haiku #1
(User Rating: 1 ) by Haligh on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 11:08:44 AM AEST (User
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if you didn't use "dead" twice i think it would flow better. |
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Re: Haiku #1
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sarah22 on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 08:44:07 PM AEST (User
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good work
on this one. |
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