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Doings of the Unknown
Contributed by
Pompous
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Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 08:33:13 AM in AEST
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happiness dies away again
gets washed away with the rain
dark clouds cover this earth
in the end, what is it all worth?
I guess the content never lasts long
again I feel like my life is all wrong
it gets darker, though its day
once again, things didn't turn out my way
a sense of loneliness fills the heart
a feeling of darkness begins to start
my world is turned upside down
as I see the King of darkness with his crown
the earth trembles under my feet
I'm sweating and dying from the heat
fires surround me from everywhere
but I'm calm, just a feeling of despair
I watch others fall into this dreaded place
it tears them apart, burns the face
as my body catches fire
the sense of grief escalates higher
the pain and anguish I cannot feel
though its not a dream, its for real
what have I done? I couldn't tell
I've unleashed wraith, opened the gates of hell
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Re: Doings of the Unknown
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 10:38:20 AM AEST
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great write, we all have days like that.
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Re: Doings of the Unknown
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 09:41:39 PM AEST
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| you captured the biblical description and feelings of Hell quite accurately! Wonderful job. |
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Re: Doings of the Unknown
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:56:24 AM AEST
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Excellent write. I love your style. You have captured these feelings perfectly. God, much better then the crap I wrote in high school. LOL
Lindsey |
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