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The Way She Was
Contributed by
maryetta
on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 04:31:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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lives altered never to be the same
people stare there is shock
there is dismay there is disbelief
the look of the haunted ever present
they cannot fathom at the cause
the ones who lives never forgets
the ones who die are the blessed
the look of the haunted ever present
you see you hear you do you live
but it never goes away it never lets go
it follows every where always reminding
the look of the haunted ever present
the tears flow with regularity a never ending flow
relief only for awhile before it repeats again
always pain always pain never ending
the look of the haunted ever present
Copyright ©
maryetta
... [
2003-10-19 04:31:07]
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Re: The Way She Was
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by Remy on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 02:15:31 PM AEST
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The theme of this I'm familiar with, it's sad and the look is haunting... good of you to share you prospective on it with us. I like this.
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Re: The Way She Was
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by maryetta on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 04:30:14 PM AEST
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this is the correct title of this poem, im no sure how i made the mistake of putting the wrong title on this poem
sorry for the mix up
maryetta |
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Re: The Way She Was
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by Tanna on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 11:31:17 AM AEST
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You're not alone Maryetta, you're not alone. This poem is also on the mark. Excellent job, keep it up!
~T |
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